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Character Indices / Mine.
« on: February 18, 2015, 06:54:22 PM »


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Carlisle Cutthroat

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Naomi Feather

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General Works / The Delightful Requests and Work Of Icarus
« on: February 18, 2015, 02:59:44 PM »
This is my projects first two paragraphs. I was wondering if someone could give me constructive criticism?

thank you

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Approved Profiles / Naomi Feather
« on: March 28, 2014, 06:33:11 PM »
Name and Occupation
- Taken Name: Naomi Feather
- Pronunciation of the Name: Nay-O-Me F-E-Th-Er
- Given Name: Alisha Holden
- Pronunciation of the Name: Al-E-Sh-A Hol-Den
- Character Job: Scientific Researcher for the Australian Sanctuary

Character Mentality
- Character Personality: She is a bubbly person with a constant smile on her face. She loves company, and appears always happy when a new person joins her team of researchers. She never takes an insult to heart. She is generally a nice person.
- Character Likes: Bacon, Bunny Rabbits, Symbols and magical creatures.
- Character Dislikes: When magic is used to harm others, when magic is taken for granted and violence.
- Mental Traits: She is a pacifist

Nationality and Allegiance
- Race and Nationality: Australian
- Allegiance: Good
- Reasons for Allegiance: She is a pacifist.

- Allies: Carlisle Cutthroat, Alisha Annox 
- Enemies: Anyone who harms her friends or colleagues.
- Family: N/A
- Friends: Tanya Fireheart, Carlisle Cutthroat, Alisha Annox, Flint Deadshot.

Character Age
- True Age: 402
- Appearance Age: 36
- Character Birthday: 1/7/1612

Character Appearance
- Character Skin Colour/Ethnicity: Slightly Tan
- Character Height: 5ft 11
- Character Weight: 166.9lbs 
- Character Hair Colour: Brunette with light highlights
- Character Hair Length/ Style: Like this;

- Character Eye Colour: Her eyes are a crimson red (see bio)
- Character Description: Average build, with 32C cup size
- Character Attire: She wears a long white doctor coat with blue figure hugging jeans and a smart black shirt. When she goes out she takes the labcoat off.
Habits and Mannerisms
- Character Voice: Her voices changes depending on mood she's in, when she's happy she has a high pitched shrilly voice. However when she's calm her voice is more professional, her voice is always full of emotion.
- Speech Traits: She has an Australian Accent.
- Languages: Hebrew, English and German.
- Habits: She bites her nails and plays with her hair when she has nothing to do.
- Mannerisms: She can't lie, when she tries to lie she starts to wander around the room.

Weapons, Equipment and Artifacts
- Pocket Items: Keys to her car and her apartment.
- Magical Equipment/Artifacts: [If your character owns any artifacts or magical items, explain them here. Still list them under the appropriate area of equipment above though.]
- Other: Owns a small apartment in Sydney and owns a Lamborghini 834.

Magic and Abilities
- Magic: Adept
- Specialization: Shapeshifter
- Immersion Metamorphosis:
- Ability Specific Info: He eyes are red due to the fact that she grew tired of normal coloured eyes.
- Signature Ability: Although she is a heavily against violence she will defend herself if she has to, she defends herself by shifting her skin cells into a bone-like cells and that protects her against most attacks. When she has changed her exoskeleton, movement is difficult but not impossible.
- Strengths: She is very good at healing herself.
- Weaknesses: When she gets frustrated she unwillingly uses her shapeshifting abilities with unknown consequences.
- Training: She was born a natural but learnt from her Father who was also a shapeshifter.

Goals, Motivation and History
- Major Goal: To learn about the creation of magic and how it works.
- Minor Goals: The educate the next generation of mages.
- Reasoning behind goal: To make sure no one takes magic for granted.
- Motivation: Her dads constant devotion to helping the world.
- Bio:

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- Additional Notes: [Is there anything else important that was not covered by the previous sections? Something that you would like to add that does not go elsewhere? Place it here.]

The Archive / Extermination or assassination?
« on: March 26, 2014, 09:46:43 PM »
This is an ORP between me and Flint, if you wish to join, feel free, but be prepared because this will likely be a blood bath of epic proportions.

The area was unfamiliar to Icarus, but then again, not many jobs were in the middle of Africa. He watched his surrounding looking for clues of disturbance to give him an idea of where to go. He sniffed the air and looked to the left. He noticed the greenery had recently disturbed and decided to go through that route.
Icarus moved swiftly and quietly as he approached what he thought to be his target. He had been given a briefing that had stated several facts about his next target, he would usually overlook animal targets, but something drew him to this. This seemed big and the payout was fairly large.
He stopped and pulled the grass delicately to obscure his view.

Fan Fiction / Icarus - The Beginning
« on: March 11, 2014, 04:00:38 PM »
This is the start of my story featuring the two of my MRP Characters, until I make more MRP Characters.

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Could someone spell check please? :3 Thank you

Approved Profiles / Icarus
« on: March 10, 2014, 04:26:34 PM »
- Icarus:

Name and Occupation
- Taken Name: Icarus Cavalli
- Pronunciation of the Name: Ik-A-Rus Ka-Val-E
- Given Name: Christoph Sinclair
- Pronunciation of the Name:Cr-I-St-Off Sin-Cl-Air
- Character Job: Assassin
- Titles: His clients know him as The Symbolist

Character Mentality
- Character Personality: Icarus is hard to read person who doesn't play well with others. He doesn't socialise unless he is searching for the target he has been hired to kill. He is very bitter and dangerous. He loves the idea of war.
- Character Likes: Violence, Solitary, weapons.   
- Character Dislikes: Hippies, Tree huggers and Pacifists.
- Mental Traits: Icarus is a perfectionist when it comes to doing his job. He likes to get the job done with little mess and if a mess does occur he makes sure there is no evidence of him or the victim being there unless specified that the victims body remains where they were murdered, in order to do this he sets symbols in areas where the victim could accidentally step on it. He has no empathy no desire for company or friends.

Nationality and Allegiance
- Race and Nationality: Russian
- Allegiance: Whoever pays him.
- Reasons for Allegiance: "If you're good at something, never do it for free"

- Allies: Whoever hires him.
- Enemies: Whoever he's being paid to kill.
- Friends: Icarus doesn't have friends, however, he has a information broker he goes to from time to time. The information broker tells him about who he has been hired to kill and also gives information on who has hired him for safety measures.

Character Age
- True Age: 80
- Appearance Age: 22
- Character Birthday: 14/1/1934

Character Appearance
- Character Skin Colour/Ethnicity: White
- Character Height: 5ft 11
- Character Weight: 88.9kg
- Character Hair Colour: An almost fading black.
- Character Hair Length/ Style: Short all over with an slightly longer fringe.
- Character Eye Colour: Light Green that's darker towards the centre.
- Character Description: Average build with broad shoulders but barely noticeable arm and leg muscles. A few freckles on his arms and dark circles under his eyes from lack of sleep. He has a triangle jaw line and round eye shape.
- Character Attire:He is usually dressed in a long sherlock like coat. Underneath the coat he has a black waist coat and white shirt with a black tie. His trousers are tailor made. His shoes are converse. He changes his clothes when he commits the murder so, as he says, "no loose ends."

Habits and Mannerisms
- Character Voice: An almost dead voice that shows barely any emotion. Shows no trace of empathy.
- Speech Traits: Heavy Russian accent
- Languages:Russian and English
- Habits: Icarus chews a lot a gum, he only chews on the left side of his mouth and swallows the gum. He also has a slight caffeine addiction and drinks a lot of energy drinks.
- Mannerisms:

Weapons, Equipment and Artifacts
- Large Equipment:
- Small Equipment: A tablet PC, 2 Smartphones, keys to a motorcycle and special symbol writing pen.
- Pocket Items: A pocket watch, gum, wallet and a diary.
- Magical Equipment/Artifacts: [If your character owns any artifacts or magical items, explain them here. Still list them under the appropriate area of equipment above though.]
- Other: Owns a small amount of land in Russia to hold any weapons that are only used for 'big' jobs. An old green Kawasaki GPZ 500 which he has modified and is considered one of his most prized possessions. He very rarely uses it. Several parts of the bike have been engraved in symbols to protect it.

Magic and Abilities
- Magic: Adept
- Specialization: Symbols
- Immersion Metamorphosis: A symbol that allows him to appear almost invisible for a short amount of time. This uses a large amount of magic and he can be easily detected by the slight distorted appearance of the things he's standing in front of.
- Ability Specific Info: Symbols
- Signature Ability: He has a tattoo of a symbol that changes it's symbol depending on what he needs. It uses up all his magic but can be the difference between life and death.
- Strengths: Identifying and weaponising symbols.
- Weaknesses: Due to the amount if magic symbols use he becomes very weak if he uses his symbols for an extended amount of time.
- Training: He learnt his symbols from books that were passed down to him.

Goals, Motivation and History
- Major Goal: To become better and stronger and learn more.
- Minor Goals: To make every death as simple and elegant as possible, including his own.
- Reasoning behind goal: To strive and to succeed in his field.
- Motivation: He has a reputation to keep up.
- Bio:

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Information Broker
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- Suescore: 12
- Additional Notes: He refuses his past to distract him from his work. He has blocked out a lot of his past but the abuse constantly comes to him at night. He prefers clean kills because if he does make a messy kill, he is reminded of his fathers abusive ways and that causes him to hesitate creating a split second moment of weakness.

Fan Fiction / I Can't Think Of A Title
« on: November 19, 2013, 04:56:39 PM »
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Could someone grammar check this? Please?

EDIT: I am going to work on this more. Everything happened to fast towards the end so over the next week you'll see changes and overall the ending change and other aspects change. If you have any advice please PM  me and/or leave a comment bellow. I request the highest of 5's

EDIT: This has had some major editing to it, changes will happen a lot over time, so...I bet no ones reading this :( It's 9 pages

Skulduggery Pleasant / A book full of Fan Fictions
« on: November 11, 2013, 02:54:50 PM »
Imagine if Derek read all the fanfics and chose the best and put them into a collection of fanfictions book type things.

Fan Fiction / Lord Vile: An unexpected return...
« on: February 10, 2013, 05:36:17 PM »
This is the beginning. If you think it's abit too mary sue-ish, don't worry, there will be a few twists and surprises. I hope you enjoy and please offer up any ideas, possible inprovemnets or if you want to be in it, just say the word and I'll find a place for you (ending in death) :) You won't want to miss the end:)

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Music / Hollywood Undead
« on: February 09, 2013, 01:06:11 PM »
Anyone heard of them?

Off Topic / I need help.
« on: February 07, 2013, 07:34:58 PM »
Is anyone here good at drawing or know anyone who is? I have a request, if they don't mind. I'll do something for them?

Approved Profiles / Carlisle Cutthroat
« on: January 30, 2013, 07:49:29 PM »
Name and Occupation
- Taken Name: Carlisle Cutthroat
- Pronunciation of the Name: Car-lie-el Ku-T-Th-ro-at
- Given Name: Alexander Sinclair
- Pronunciation of the Name: Al-Ex-An-Der Sin-Cl-air
- Character Job: Detective
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Character Mentality
- Character Personality: Carlisle is a nice guy who likes to keep to himself. If he is put into a sociable situation he will talk and make friends. He won't however go see them from time to time or even give them any of his personal details. He puts barely any effort in when he is being sociable. He drinks on occasion. He likes to use magic and uses it on a daily basis. The magic he uses is symbols etched into his furniture or his cane. When he's alone he likes to watch TV, but he doesn't watch it enough to have a favorite TV show. While he is on a case he is ruthless and will do anything to get to the bottom of it. He will only kill if he has a good reason though. Many reasons include; Treason, Murder, Kidnapping and abuse of any kind. He likes to observe others and learns from observing then practicing. He is also a Kinetic learner. He likes to hunt in order to get better at at bone breaking.
- Character Likes: Practicing symbols, Cases that require action, Architecture, London Taxis.
- Character Dislikes: Vampires, Werewolves, Necromancers, Restrictions, and Cats.
- Mental Traits: Strong minded, A good sense of right and wrong, Observant.

Nationality and Allegiance
- Race: Human
- Nationality: English
- Allegiance: Good
- Reasons for Allegiance: He likes to help people who need it.

Character Age
- True Age: 110
- Appearance Age: 21
- Character Birthday:02/06/1903

Character Appearance
- Character Skin Colour/Ethnicity: Pale.
- Character Height: 175.26 cm
- Character Weight: 140 lbs
- Character Hair Colour: Dirty blond with light blond streaks.
- Character Hair Length/ Style: The hair stops just above the neck, the hair is combed into a windswept style that goes off to the right.
- Character Eye Colour: light green with a darker shade towards the center.
- Character Description: Medium build, has a scar on the left wrist. Has a six pack and fairly muscly arms. He has a broken leg that was caused when a Necromancer attempted to kill him. The attempted to kill him using a knife similar to billy ray sanguine's razor, the knife was pushed deep into his leg splitting the bone in the middle. The bone couldn't heal and he was left with a large scar through the shin and ankle.
- Character Attire: Blue trousers with a white top. He wears a black jacket on top that can deflect bullets. His trousers aren't as strong and are protectively normal but can deflect fire attacks. He owns a Cane that is used to help with his leg and as a defensive weapon.

Habits and Mannerisms
- Character Voice: Strong English accent.
- Speech Traits: Voice becomes muffled after speaking for a long time. His words combine together to become a lot of words that no one understands but him.
- Habits: Always eats tic-tacs.
- Mannerisms:

Weapons, Equipment and Artifacts
- Large Equipment: A gold plated Desert Eagle that is used when slowing down suspects. 
- Pocket Items: Spearmint Tic-Tacs
- Ammunition: Bullets.
- Weaponry: A gold plated Desert Eagle.
- Magical Equipment/Artifacts: A Cane that can generate a small force field to protect him. It needs 2 hours to recharge after every use and is covered in symbols that can generate less powerful defense attacks. The cane is up to his hip, it is wooden but covered in a thin layer of titanium. Symbols have been engraved on the titanium layer. The bottom of the cane has a Symbol that converts his pain into a source of power as a last ditch effort of defense. The head is Titanium skull with crystallized eyes within the socket. The defense depends on the amount of pain he feels. for instance if he feels a lot of pain it would be a strong defense.
- Other: A small apartment in London and a studio apartment in Dublin.

Magic and Abilities
- Magic: Adept
- Specialization: Bonebreaking and Basic Symbols
- Signature Ability: Using his arrow to slow the target down before handcuffing them.
- Strengths: He is one of the best users of his chosen discipline because the number of people who learn bonebreaking is low.
- Weaknesses: He is afraid of large amounts of water (E.G Rivers, Oceans.) because when he was young he fell into the river Thames on a search with his parents to find him an instructor , He relies on his physical strength to be able to catch his prey. He is susceptible to water Attacks because he doesn't understand how to defend himself against them due to his lack of experience with the elements. Is easily beaten when it comes down to magic on magic fight.
- Training: He learnt it under the Guidance of his mentor. The mentor was found after three years of searching, he was found on the way to the Scottish sanctuary.. He agreed to help as long as the child would work under a sanctuary. Th request was made because he wanted bonebreaking to be used in a controlled way and he believed the sanctuary would allow that.

Goals, Motivation and History
- Major Goal: To become the best detective.
- Minor Goals: Improve his Symbol Magic
- Reasoning behind goal: So he can defend himself in a wider range of areas such as his apartment. So he can replace the old detective and become a highly viewed personal within the Sanctuary.
- Motivation: His mum was killed and he wants to find the guy who killed her and bring him to justice.
- Bio: When he was 3 he took an interest in bonebreaking after hearing a story about a famous Bonebreaker, His parents decided that bonebreaking would be a good skill for him to learn since it's so rare so they took him on a three year search for a mentor, leaving their current jobs as scientists learning the affects of certain items on certain practices of magic. During the three years he learnt the basics of fire and air and his mother had began to teach him some necromancy, after a month of learning about the theory behind necromancy they found a mentor. The mentor agreed to if he worked under a Sanctuary. He trained with Bonebreaking for 15 years before the surge occurred, rendering him to only be able to use adept abilities. He trained for another 20 years leaving him at the age of 41. He had become a good enough Bonebreaker so his mentor told him to go to the Sanctuary and apply for a job as a detective as they could use some rare abilities in order to scare the person so they'll be honest. Throughout the 35 years he learnt how to use symbols as a side ability.

After He had become a detective for the English sanctuary he was given minor cases until the death of several scientists had shook up the English Mages. He and several other Mages were given the case. After a few months they hadn't come up with anything. They asked him to see if his parents would mind being "bait". He asked and they agreed on the condition that he watched them at all times. After just a few hours the killer had entered the lab killing several cleavers and two Mages in the process, although he had a few bruises and a broken toe. He killed his mum by surprise whilst Carlisle watched unable to speak due to the lump that had formed in his throat. and his father shunted away. He stepped in and began to fight the killer unable to see his face as he was fighting back tears. After being disarmed he was thrown to the ground and the killer went to kill him but decided to scar him for life. He took his knife which would inflict a magical injury that could not be healed. The knife was plunged deep into his shin, through the tibia and fibia and the pulled down to his ankle. The killer left leaving him lying on the floor screaming in agony as the reinforcements arrived. His father never returned from shunting away.

After months of physio therapy and surgery the pain lessened until it was only just bearable to walk. The English sanctuary constructed a cane that converted pain and turned it into an energy source that nullified the pain and could also work as a last ditch defensive power source. He took the cane and began working on the symbols to be etched into it. He continued learning symbols and slowly over 40 years added to his cane, until he had a a lot of defensive symbols but one major one. This symbol would project a force field that could protect against most attacks. After searching through his parents possessions that he had kept, he stumbled across his mothers will. The will was read out, and he was left with the small apartment in London and a studio apartment in Dublin. She also left him with her item of power, a locket which he couldn't open or access its power. It wasn't significant, it was just a reminder of his mothers sacrifice. Within his fathers will he was left his dads old motorbike and a his small fortune. He had gotten the hobby of hunting small animals as sometimes even the odd wiled boar which he didn't hunt often. He uses his arrow to slow them down, the n breaks their bones in order to improve his skill. He had also inherited a human skeleton that had been cleaned a disinfected three time, and it was covered in healing symbols in order to improve his abilities.

After 30 years of working in minor cases he quit the English sanctuary and made his way towards the Ireland sanctuary. This was due to the fact that there was a rumor that his mothers killer had turned up in Ireland. He also hopes England is the home to a few bonebreakers to teach him new skills.

- Mary Sue Score: 7
- Additional Information: Cutthroat is a Synonym for Ruthless so I chose it. The pain is registered on a scale of 1-10, if he achieves a full 10 of pain, which would normally be unbearable but with the cane he can only feel a slight stabbing sensation, the defense becomes extremely strong and can defend itself against most if not all attacks. Whilst 1 he wouldn't be able to feel any pain and the defense will only protect against a few elemental attacks.

Thanks Arim :)

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