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Attalos Chabrias ~ Attack Dog of the Côte d'Ivoire Sanctuary
« on: February 27, 2014, 05:01:13 AM »


Name and Occupation
- Taken Name: Bound to given name.                                                         
- Given Name: Attalos Chabrias
- Pronunciation of the Name: Ee-tal-os Shab-ree-as
- Character Job: Personal attack dog of the Cote d’Ivoire Elders, Captian of the Black Guard.
- Titles: The Spartan, Captain Chabrias.

Character Mentality
- Character Personality: Attalos is one of the best known members of the Sanctuary, however he is one of the most rarely seen. He is very untrusting, and will only reveal his true plan to the other members of the Black Guard or the Elders. Attalos is also rather… Unstable, being a psychopath and slightly psychotic, he is also incredibly sadistic and full of raging bloodlust. He is able to rein this in for people he respects, however is still looked upon with a good deal of fear. Over the years he has learned and learned, becoming incredibly intelligent, as well as a master tactician and strategist, and his lack of magic has forced him to develop several ways to combat magic. Another problem with Attalos is that even though he is an incredible tactician his judgment can be clouded by his bloodlust. He also suffers from terrifying hallucinations that can render him useless for days.     
- Character Likes: Pain, Mayhem, destruction, power, death, bladed weapons, being alone, other afflicted.
- Character Dislikes: His hallucinations, mages, guns.
- Mental Traits: Sadistic, Psychotic, Psychopathic, genius, master tactician, incredibly quick learner.

Nationality and Allegiance
- Race and Nationality: Greek, Vampire.
- Allegiance: Chaotic Neutral
- Reasons for Allegiance: He is almost blindly devoted to Canaan.

Relationships
- Allies: The Cote d’Ivoire Sanctuary.
- Enemies: Pretty much everyone else, he views Gideon Macabre with an elevated level of hatred, as he is one of few living people who have stood in combat against him.
- Family: All long dead.
- Friends: The Spartan doesn’t really view anyone as a “friend.”
- Significant Other: No.

Character Age
- True Age: 2,458
- Appearance Age: 30
- Character Birthday: 14/5/425 BC

Character Appearance
- Character Skin Colour/Ethnicity: Dark Tan
- Character Height: 6’ 7”
- Character Weight: 110 Kg.
- Character Hair Colour: Rough light brown.
- Character Hair Length/ Style: A loose mop that grows down to his eyebrows in the front, down past his ears on the sides, and to the base of his neck t the back. 
- Character Eye Colour: Dark Hazel.
- Character Description: The Spartan is tall and very muscular. His arms and legs are like steel cables wrapped around bones, and his entire body is covered in a myriad of scars, from several feet long to mere inches. His face is also scarred, almost beyond recognition. It is missing a cheek, connecting his face only by a few strips of flesh. His eyes are sharp; however the years have turned them cruel. 
- Character Attire: The Spartan’s attire usually consists of a loose fitting thermal shirt, a pair of matte black combat boots, and OD Green Kuhl Revolvr pants. When knowing combat is approaching, Attalos will don his Spartan armor, complete with shield and spear.

Habits and Mannerisms
- Character Voice: The Spartan doesn’t speak.
- Speech Traits: N/A
- Languages: N/A
- Habits: Attalos will curl his fists whenever he  gets angry, and his left hand twitches slightly whenever exited. 
- Mannerisms: Attalos pathologically sharpens his many blades.

Weapons, Equipment and Artifacts
- Large Equipment: He usually doesn’t carry any large equipment, but when he is expecting combat he has his spear with him. Sometimes, very rarely, he will carry a bow of some kind.
- Small Equipment: Various blades, usually a Xyphos or Gladius.
- Pocket Items: None.
 Ammunition: Occasionally a quiver of arrows if he carries a bow.
- Weaponry: A LOT of bladed weapons. He owns swords going from the Japanese Odachi and Scottish Claymore, to the smaller Xyphos and Gladius. His collection of blades numbers around 300, including maces, spears axes and other weapons. He also owns several different kinds of bow, from the English longbow and Apache Shortbow, to the massive Yumi, only about 12 of the blades are Quasi-Magic metals. 
- Magical Equipment/Artifacts: 
- Other: Attalos occupies a guard tower in the southeastern corner of the Cote d’Ivoire compound, it extends underground to a tunnel system which spans the whole Sanctuary.

Magic and Abilities
- Magic: N\A

Magical Diseases
- Magical Disease or Affliction: Vampire
- Inflictee: The Maestro
- Bite Mark: A vicious scar running from his right shoulder to the middle of his neck.
- Benefits: The Spartan is believed to be the second oldest  Vampire alive today, thus is incredibly fast and strong.
- Downsides: If he doesn’t take his Serum he kills everything in sight. 
- Fitting In: He takes serum.
- Suppressant/Cure: Serum.

Goals, Motivation and History
- Major Goal: Help the Cote d’Ivoire Sanctuary in its aims.
- Minor Goals: Get rid of his hallucinations.
- Reasoning behind goal: His devotion to Canaan and Israel, and the debt he owes them.
- Motivation: He owes Canaan a debt.

- Additional Notes:
- Suescore:
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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2014, 12:14:52 AM »
Could I get this looked over?

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2014, 05:12:46 AM »
Since Eoin has already looked over it, I imagine this would be pretty much done.

I had a quick read and the mental traits seem a bit over the top, but it's fine for a NPC.
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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #3 on: April 01, 2014, 07:38:52 PM »
So is this approved?

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2014, 07:00:13 AM »
Only Max can approve profiles for the MRP. He'll see this soon enough. If he doesn't reply in like a week, I guess you should PM him.
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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #5 on: April 07, 2014, 07:11:36 AM »
The name irks me... If you feel the need to keep some iteration of "The Spartan" can it just be "Spartan" or something? I feel like The Spartan is better suited to titles.

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #6 on: April 07, 2014, 08:16:20 AM »
Ikr, every time I write an RP post for The Pink Lady, I regret her name.
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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #7 on: April 07, 2014, 08:19:28 AM »
Nobody in the books has "the" in their name even if they've got a title as their name (eg Lord Vile). It just seems sueish idk.

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #8 on: April 07, 2014, 08:22:42 AM »
The Torment?

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2014, 08:29:05 AM »
We don't talk about the Torment. *shudders*
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« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2014, 08:30:04 AM »
Giant spider monsters are always the exception to the rule.

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #11 on: April 07, 2014, 08:31:14 AM »
*nods* Always.
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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #12 on: April 07, 2014, 09:15:00 AM »
The Torment is a self obsessed freakshow of a horrible character.
He isn't a sue, but that doesn't make him a good character.
He's just this concept that Derek tried too hard to enforce that ends up being a cancerous leech on the series and never quite just goes away.
That is why we don't talk about the Torment.

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #13 on: April 08, 2014, 02:31:02 AM »
@Maxwell: He goes by his given name, he only has The Spartan as his taken name to keep people from controlling him.

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Re: The Spartan ~ DamuMut Core Group Member
« Reply #14 on: April 08, 2014, 08:00:14 AM »
Yes I understand the concept of a taken name but the fact that he doesn't use it doesn't change the fact that the taken name is sueish nor detract anything from my original point.

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