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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #210 on: January 05, 2017, 07:56:44 AM »
I contend. Symbol Magic is what its known as in the books (or there abouts), and its fine as Symbols.

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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #211 on: January 05, 2017, 11:46:51 PM »
A review.

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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #212 on: January 10, 2017, 07:09:25 AM »
@Icarus

Symbols is looking awesome. All I have is a few questions about some things that could be added or expanded on. However it looks completely fine as it is and ready for approval either way.

Do symbols originating from different countries/civilizations possess different styles or resemble specific things? As I said before this isn't particularly necessary.
When activated is glowing a specific colour the only thing symbols, or are their other possible reactions that occur when certain symbols are activated?


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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #213 on: January 10, 2017, 11:47:48 AM »
@Icarus

Symbols is looking awesome. All I have is a few questions about some things that could be added or expanded on. However it looks completely fine as it is and ready for approval either way.

Do symbols originating from different countries/civilizations possess different styles or resemble specific things? As I said before this isn't particularly necessary.
When activated is glowing a specific colour the only thing symbols, or are their other possible reactions that occur when certain symbols are activated?

Added that symbols are sometimes based off cultures language. Also added that some symbols glow and others can set of a chain reaction of symbols being activated.

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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #214 on: January 10, 2017, 12:12:20 PM »
1/2 Approval for Symbols.


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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #215 on: January 11, 2017, 08:15:20 AM »
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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #216 on: January 11, 2017, 09:18:51 AM »
sarge idea add that if u fail to controls the gist and it absorb u instead the user and the gist becomes a poltergeist
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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #217 on: January 14, 2017, 12:19:35 AM »
I'm happy with Symbols! 2/2 approved :)

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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #218 on: January 18, 2017, 03:47:15 AM »
A review of Gist Magic.

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Looking good but a little sparse. No really grammar/spelling mistakes and all i can see wrong is the fact that it needs just a little more fleshing out. Otherwise it's a fine Custom Discipline.


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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #219 on: January 22, 2017, 03:17:46 AM »
I've edited the magic, so it's good to be reviewed again.
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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #220 on: January 26, 2017, 10:00:12 AM »
@Sargey

I'm bad at giving secondary reviews after a first review where everything has been addressed.
It's likely that another PM may spot one or two issues that I have missed but for the most part this discipline profile is looking great

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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #221 on: February 28, 2017, 07:41:12 PM »
I'll get onto a review for Gists within the week.

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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #222 on: March 04, 2017, 09:04:19 PM »
I've begun my review for Gists! Gimme 4 days and I should have it finished for you.

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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #223 on: March 05, 2017, 04:58:52 AM »
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You've done a fine job adapting Gist magic into the rp setting. There's just a few areas you could expand on slightly, and I've offered some wording suggestions too. Other than that, I'm really happy with what you've got here.



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Re: Custom Magic Disciplines - Applications
« Reply #224 on: March 11, 2017, 01:07:43 PM »
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You've done a fine job adapting Gist magic into the rp setting. There's just a few areas you could expand on slightly, and I've offered some wording suggestions too. Other than that, I'm really happy with what you've got here.



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